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Discussion of "The Park: Nine" by MrLightening


1 writerwannabe 2 years, 1 month ago Reply

Excellent. The introduction of Freddie is perfectly timed and ideal for the plot. Me likey! lol


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1 MrLightening 2 years, 1 month ago Reply

This Freddy guy is actually giving me the creeps. I had a nightmare about him last night. I hope Keith manages to get past him ;)


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