Discussion of "The Park: Nine" by MrLightening
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writerwannabe 2 years, 1 month ago
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Excellent. The introduction of Freddie is perfectly timed and ideal for the plot. Me likey! lol |
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MrLightening 2 years, 1 month ago
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This Freddy guy is actually giving me the creeps. I had a nightmare about him last night. I hope Keith manages to get past him ;) |
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