Discussion of "The Air Within" by MrLightening

Interesting. Is this supposed to be a poem? If so, make the end of the word rhyme, but if this isn't... I'd like to see more. However, I kind of want to know more, unless this wasn't a story. Keep it up =)

Um-m-m... Poems don't have to rhyme.

Excellent, Lightening!

Great "moody" intro to the story. I'll reserve further comments until I've read the rest.

Thank you jazzfan! Looking forward :)

I don't know about that rhyming poem part from creativewriter. Poems don't have to Rhyme, but I'm really interested to read more from you. I thought this was the perfect intro for me into your writing. Beautiful, well done.

Thank you Nalia :) Looked at your FB page. Seems you take writing seriously ;)