Discussion of "The Park II: One" by MrLightening
writerwannabe 2 years ago
This was most excellent! Tension, conflict, suspense, backstory...very, very well done, my friend!
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MrLightening 2 years ago
Thank you! I was very pleased with how this chapter came out :) You will have to wait a little for the next one though. I've got so much work to do on here!
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