Discussion of "He Is" by Mother-Oak
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Inablecipher 1 year, 11 months ago
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I like your use of italics for subtle enphasis here and there. Please check out my stuff and give me some feedback! |
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ahintoflove 1 year, 10 months ago
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I loved this :) Check mine out. |
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writerwannabe 1 year, 10 months ago
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Welcome to SM, Mother...;o). This is a very good first story, here. I liked the narrator's voice and tone, the wordsmithing and above all the premise. I'm all about story and this has the makings of a very good one....;o) |
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