Discussion of "Jack of Quests:an Athosian Tale" by Miki_Apo

Boy, I thought this was well-written! at first I thought it was a dungeons and dragons type tale of elves, dragons and wizards, and then you fooled me, it was a video game! then there was the carnival, and the accident, and the bridge scene, way to go on all your different plot twists and turns. of all the new entries today i picked yours and i don't know why i did, but i'm glad i did. i look forward to reading some more!

Thank you somuch!