Discussion of "Chapter II-4" by Miki_Apo
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Hudson1 2 years, 8 months ago
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this picked up the pace from Chapter 3, there was a lot more action, and you're moving the story right along. i'd say it's very interesting tale and I look forward to seeing each installment. i wish you good luck in continuing the saga! |
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pheonixbird 2 years, 8 months ago
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Great chapter! Keep writing |
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