Discussion of "Chapter II-4" by Miki_Apo
Hudson1 3 years, 2 months ago
this picked up the pace from Chapter 3, there was a lot more action, and you're moving the story right along. i'd say it's very interesting tale and I look forward to seeing each installment. i wish you good luck in continuing the saga!
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pheonixbird 3 years, 1 month ago
Great chapter! Keep writing
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