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"Restless." -> "Memory"

Two Women  by Metzgermeister

The first woman my first love.

She has brown hair and brown eyes

For her, my heart is the prize

Of her passion play

She consumes my thoughts - 

More with each passing day.

I am lost without her

I would follow her far and near

She is mine forever more.

And I am hers - 

Her absence is my greatest fear.

My fear brought to life -

By the second woman - the purveyor

Of my godless licentiousness.

She has blue eyes and hair of burgundy.

Her motives are ruinous; She enters my life

By accident; by mistake;

I am divided by the succubus whore

Deluded by her promises and lies

Falling for it is an act of mutiny

And a testament to carelessness.

Behind the disguise

The other woman is a demoness; twisted by black and empty

hearted, self-serving misanthropy

By divine grace, I am saved; spared.

The succubus is cast away

The love and desire of my heart standing beside me

So I say to her

Stay forever near

To lose you again is something I cannot bear.

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Date created: Dec. 2, 2010
Date published: Dec. 2, 2010
Comments: 3
Tags: demoness, godless, memory, poem, poetry, restless, succubus
Word Count: 242
Times Read: 203
Story Length: 1