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1 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Thank you for your comment; I'm glad you enjoyed my poem and that it spoke to you.


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1 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Why thank you!


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1 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Thank you for reading my poems.


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1 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Thank you for your comments, haha! I do restrain myself in my poetry quite a bit. I was taught to write poetry within certain constraints; when I write what naturally comes out of me, it tends to get really violent or really inappropriate, haha. Too many Stephen King novels, horror movies, and grudges held.


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1 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

I'm glad everyone enjoyed it! About the structuring: I was inspired to and taught the craft of writing poetry by an English teacher i had in high school. She was in love with the idea of poetry is only poetry if written within the confines of rhyme and meter, haha.


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1 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Your poem was very impressive; I enjoyed reading it quite a bit! I could feel the bitterness and resentment; the sardonic sarcasm and maybe a tinge of regret. Very, very good.


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2 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

Hello everyone, I'm new to StoryMash and so far I have been quite pleased by the site. I've posted four poems that I've written over the past few weeks and I would like some honest critiquing of my work. If I get enough feedback, I'll begin posting chapters of a novel I'm working on. I hope everyone enjoys my submissions! Thanks again!


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1 Metzgermeister 3 years, 9 months ago Context

This was a very interesting read. I like the way it is written. It's slightly confusing at times, but after rereading it, I figured it out. Very nice and an interesting use of prose.


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