hello, I'm new to story mash and have just started my first story on this site. I have read a few stories on story mash and am amazed with the talent the site harbors, and would quite enjoy feedback and collaborations. I have dreams like most of you to be a writer and am currently looking for my style, so any hints as to what I'm doing right as well as what I'm doing wrong could very well help an aspiring young writers dreams come to fruition.