Melisande_Luna
Date Joined: Nov. 13, 2007
Last Login: Jan. 12, 2008
Last Login: Jan. 12, 2008
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Melisande_Luna 1 year ago
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damned fine storytelling, the title needs zing. I like your pace and cynical tone. |
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1 Chapter by Melisande_Luna
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[M]ile after endlessly numbing mile set my teeth and my gut in a clenching contest. Normally, I'd wager on my teeth to win. Tonight, my gut was giving the choppers a fair run. Plus, my ass hurt.
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