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0 Wizardknows 6 years, 8 months ago Reply

"The Backspace Team?" Let me think about that. Team itself implies, implys, &^%$%! - hints at oragnization. I loath the big "O," except in sexual terms, of course, in which case it is highly desirable. Can your team engage in sex? In group sex? I sympathize (ha,ha,ha) with your quest to find and treasure that to which none of us aspire but so easily find. Imperfection. Sadly, in your writing, you have miserably failed to acheive that devine state.

Manny


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1 Jackoalltrades 6 years, 7 months ago Reply

I rather enjoyed this bit. It was amusing. Wouldn't win a Pulitzer but it was still a funny bit of prose nonetheless.


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1 Maynardfan 6 years, 7 months ago Reply

you enjoyed it? are you sure? i would never go for pulitzer...that's something of an american dream and such...


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1 Jackoalltrades 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Well, I liked the last line. "We are the backspace team." Made me chuckle. And although Wizardknows didn't particularly like it, the choppy writing style fit for the theme. And yes, I'm sure I enjoyed it. Even read it again :P


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1 Maynardfan 6 years, 4 months ago Reply

Thanks, Jacoalltrades! I appreciate your second trip and your feedback.


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