Discussion of "The Tears I Lack" by Marykm
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S_Angele 3 months ago
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Hi, I was looking for an entrance into the story, but there needs to be more for other writers to build on. |
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mybeautifuldaydream 3 months ago
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I believe this is more of a personal expression of pain than a story, which is fine too. I have felt this way before, so I could relate. If these are your true feelings, keep writing. It helps. Even when you can't cry, writing helps. It allows you to express the pain and get the pain out, even though it may not be through tears. Good writing. |
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haihazan 2 months, 3 weeks ago
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It's very personal yet it's very universal. Thank you for this lovely piece. |
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