Discussion of "The Wind" by Marykm
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PEPPZ 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Nice little poem. Good job |
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theblackhand 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Well written. I admire you, such intense words for a thirteen year old. Keep on writing, well into your adult years and you will be an accomplished author. |
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Marykm 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Thanks for the comments. I appreciate such support! |
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palindrome 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Thirteen! Jesus Christ, I can just about write at this level now, and I'm a grown man. Keep up the good work! |
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Alexxis 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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You made me feel like I was there and experience the emotions. That is a real gift. Look forward to reading more of your work. :) |
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Marykm 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Again, thanks. |
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politeditor 2 months, 1 week ago
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Wow, you are 13??? What a piece! Wow, just keep writing and keep expressing your emotions through your words. As Alexxis said, to be able to do what you did in that poem is truly a gift. Well done!! |
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Persephonie 2 months, 1 week ago
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Very nice piece. I give it a 3.0. Keep up the good work. In an effort to eliminate this from the top ten entries of the contest,with nothing against you, for now, I will rate this low....but i promise to go backand re-rate it when round 1 is over. :) |
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