Discussion of "Step Aside (Poem)" by Marykm
xfionax 6 years, 3 months ago
Wow. I thought this was great. It was easy to read, almost light in a way but when I read it again the meaning ran deeper than I thought. The last two lines are very powerful. Great job.
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Marykm 6 years, 3 months ago
Thank you very much:)I haven't written anything in a while, but these words seemed to come easier than I thought they would.
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