You're welcome c:

You seem to have quite the original story here c:
I think you should work on editing a bit, however.

Good job ;)

I think you did a good job with this prolouge.
Keep it up ;)

If I didn't know any better I might believe this- you always seem to have a new chapter when I log on here.
Good job with your crazy story you conjured up.

Thank you very much:)I haven't written anything in a while, but these words seemed to come easier than I thought they would.

I can't wait for more of this story!
The only thing I'd like to mention is that the girl give more detail of the house once inside. That way, the man would be even more surprising.

I understand the message of this poem and utterly agree with it!
It's always sad when nobody comments :c
Good job :)

Thank you very much ^.^

This is a great story!
Very well told.

P.S.
Thanks for commenting on my poem!
I appreciate it.

Thanks for commenting and reading!