I like it!
It's really nice.

Sounds like a great plan! I look forward to this.

I enjoyed this very much! (By the way, thanks for commenting and rating on mine!)

It should be obvious to the readers, but if not you can do a few things. I suggest adding a comment to your work that says something along the lines of "this chapter was not intended to be added on to." Maybe at the end of your chapter you can add:
-End-

Oh, I'm sorry that happened!
I have to point out that 'too long' in some cases means the story isn't going anywhere or is drawn out in more detail than needed. You are probably right that they just didn't read it and didn't care, though.

There was music, it made a lot more sense with it. But I forgot how it went!

I agree with hebe.

I read the other chapter and this one and I am confused about a few things:
You say she still loves him-so what's with the divorce?
In the second chapter she is just meeting him or something. You never explained that.
You just don't describe things very well

it is a cute story....

Cute, but lots of mistakes.
Still, it's a cute story.

Again, thanks.
I will keep writing!

Nice writing!
I am wondering what will happen next...