Discussion of "Wicked Girl" by LoveorLace
Cornelius 1 year, 1 month ago
Devastating! I love how it infolds. At first a brother is reading his sister the riot act. It becomes clear he being a rascal.Then he leans in close to whisper in her hear, with a tint of sexuality. Which is disturbing. Then it becomes clear he has done something to her- to hurt her, and eventually I realize his sister is in pieces. The end with mom coming home, and the dreadful events that are about to unfold in the minutes after the last line leave an excellent cliff-hanger. You have taken the slasher dementia so common in horror/thriller genres and gave it your own special touch. Bravo!
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