Thank you so much, for your kind words, but due to a lot of negativity spreading throughout this website, I think I'll be leaving this site.

Too many people complaining about "children" being on the site. If children want to write, then let them be. No need to blatantly complain on people's writings about it, you know? Well, I hope you have a better time on this site than I did.

If you ever grow tired of this place, try www.wattpad.com, it's much more...how could I put this...accepting of all ages. If you wanna find me on there, my username is xXxDeathTheGirlxXx.

Have a good one, and I wish you the best :D

This was beautiful. I felt a wide variety of emotions while reading this piece. I felt so sorry for the boy. But who gave him the name "Abandoned"? Or did he give it to himself?

Very nice, I had fun reading this. It kept me interested through the whole thing. Nice descriptions, and a cliff-hanger ending. You did a nice job, here.

Oh, thank you! Hmm, yeah recently a few people on other writing websites I've been on mentioned my chapters being a little lengthy. Huh. It's strange, because normally, everyone would say my chapters were way too short, heh heh.

Anyway, thank you very much for the comment, I truly appreciate it. And by all means, add a chapter of your own! It'd be a nice change, considering I haven't seen much collaboration on here.

Thanks again for reading and commenting. It means a lot to me.

I enjoyed reading this story. It really makes you think about life, and it sort of changes your train of thought. I'm sure a lot of people will think differently on things, even if just for a moment.

Nicely done.

Mmm, it's quite a shame how low the activity is on this. Between fellow community members, I mean. I for one, love getting feedback on my works. It gives real encouragement, and even the negative comments will at least help you improve in your writing.

I'll be commenting a lot more on other people's works, and hope I get the same in return.

Write on, my brothers and sisters! (Okay..that was corny, but still)

This is really good! It's intriguing. Really pulls a reader in, ya know?

The only thing you need to focus on, is proper capitalization and grammar. Proof read all of your pieces before publishing them. There's no rush, so take your time :D Good job, and keep up the good work!

Yes, I agree. I think the community should be more active toward each other. That's what it's all about here. Reading and writing together. That's sort of the point of the site right? I know I'll be commenting a lot more as well.

Oh my Gosh, thank you so much! I was so nervous about posting this, and being descriptive was always something I'd have trouble with. I'm glad I did well.

Again, thank you so much, I really appreciate it.