Discussion of "Irreparable" by Lissy

I really like it...I am looking forward to the next chapter.

Thank you. =]

Welcome to SM, Lissy!

This is a very well written introduction of your talent. I like how you set the stage for subsequent chapters and clearly indicated that this would not be "just another love story".

I once got my hand lightly slapped for using the term "dear reader". After the cast was removed (three broken knuckles), I was able to think rationally and agreed - it was a bad choice of words. I think, though, that in this case it fits quite well...;o)

Thank you. I love to read love stories, but I'm a realist. Life doesn't always have happy endings and there needs to be more stories like that out there.

A cast for your hand being "lightly" slapped? Ouch. Most of my stories I like to write in first person and with the narrator talking to the audience, so I think the "dear reader" bit kind of fit. =]

So sad and beautiful :( I am definitely going to wait for the next chapter.

Thank you. I'm very glad you think so. =]