Discussion of "228TH STREET" by Lika

2		writerwannabe 2 years, 3 months ago Reply Welcome to SM, Lika! Good start here. I like the imagery and the last line was fabulous! You should work on tense; you mixed them up several times, but as it only slightly detracted from the story...in my book, it's not a biggie!..;o)
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1		Lika 2 years, 3 months ago Reply Thanks for reading .
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