Very cute .

I like everything you write . Have you ever been published ?

Great !

I thought it was very funny , especially the unexpected ending . Loved it !

A space shuttle .

Getting addicted to your writing .

Got it .

Thank you for taking the time and answering my question . Your answer explains things , but it doesn't help . I wish there was a way to know right away that I've got a new comment . That way I don't have to click on all my questions and comments to see if I've got any new ones . Thanks again .

I thought I've got a new comment on my story , but it was my own reply to the first comment that was made by a reader . Still , the record says that I have two comments .

Dear DOGDEITY11 ( BTW , what an interesting choice of name ) ,
Thank you so very much for reading and commenting on my story .
Unfortunately , I can't edit the chapters I've already published , but I promise to all my readers to find the time and work harder on the rest of the story .
The story itself is not something I have to make up every time I sit at the computer , and it's not like a have a plan either . The reality part of the story ( walking home , passing through the 228th Street , working with children , etc . ) is taken from my life . Even the way my character looks and reacts to things is all me . But the fantasy part ( as a twist to a story ) just came to me in one blow . I walked home from work , and by the time I got home , the story was in my head . Right now , I'm just trying to get it out . So , from the chapter that I plan to call " When the Night Turns to Light " I will try and not to disappoint my readers .
Thanks again for reading and for your advice as well .