Discussion of "The Cloak of Go Gurin" by Leprechaun
KatofTroy 6 years, 8 months ago
This is very colorful and I can feel movement with this. I would like to see where this is going. What's the history? Will you please write on?
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icanziiravor 6 years, 7 months ago
I agree with Kat. This was a well done beginning and instantly draws you in wanting to know more about this place and this woman. This has great potential.
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