Discussion of ""Alexa, I Love You"" by LauraJoslyn

Is Alexa alive or dead? Is the character a man? Why was it a somber morning? It doesn't seem to match with the character's motive for revenge. You think he/she/it would be happy about it. I like the voice, but keep working. This story could go anywhere.

I wasn't trying to be overly critical when I wrote that, you know. I was asking you to elaborate in chapter 2 and encouraging you by saying the story could go anywhere, meaning it was a good start.

But thanks just the same for criticizing mine, and changing the last sentence to something meaningless. If you have any constructive criticism I'd actually really like to hear it.

This comment is the first I have read. I just signed up on the site today and started my story. I did not read your first comment, so I don't know who sent you a comment and changed your writing. I am sorry that you think it was me. If this is normal for this site though, I think I'll have to remove myself from it after less that a day.
Do people really go and change your writing on here? That is ..... or should be illegal. -+That suck that this person did that to you. I'd have been pissed too. I don't blame you for being upset at all.
Have a good evening,
laurajoslyn

I liked the beginning. It caught my attention, as did the title. You could possibly use some more description, and fill your readers on what is actually going on. I wasn't sure about who Alexa was, or why you killed the person. Other then that it was great. I would like to hear of a update ya?