Discussion of "PRPF~ The Terms" by LadyLuck

A druid? What the...? lol Wow!

Yep, threw ya for a loop? lol

The terms are interesting and mysterious, of course I'm just saying that for everyone else's benifit, lol, you told me about the next chapter on the phone! Haha, I got a sneek peek!

yeah and don't go ruining it for everyone! Dang, what am I going to do with you! ;P

This chapter is the set-up. Well-played, LadyL. I don't think Dr. Connor would use the term, '...You guys...'. Before we go to the publishing house, I want a crack at the fine-tune editing. Just small stuff that so far has not gotten in the way of the storytelling.

Yeah, not that you said that, I realize who un-character like it would be for him to say that. You are also correct on the set-up. Spoiler Alert: we are fixing to get into a bit of action then move along from there.


BY THE WAY, FOR ALL READERS!
I was informed that the robot reference droid is actually spelled with an 'o' not an 'u'. drUid is some sort of ancient celtic warrior or something. Sorry for the mishap!

Good job, Lady L! I like where this is going (make that, where I think it's going) and as al mentioned, this chapter is a well worked "set up".

Thanks writerwannabe! Glad you think so!