Discussion of "Nobody's Child" by LadyB
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honeygloom 5 years, 4 months ago
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I love this! Great voice and great detail. You did a really good job. |
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Ezra-Mae 5 years, 3 months ago
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Best story I've read so far! |
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Rockbilly 5 years, 3 months ago
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I can definitely identify with your character here, maybe a little too much? Anyway I hope you like the addition. |
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Wizardknows 5 years, 3 months ago
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Dear Lady B: I'm still hurting from reading your story. Wish you hadn't dragged us into that house, certainly not a home. Into that house, introduced us to a brave little girl. (Would love to know how old she is. Same for Nathan.) But you did and it hurt. I pray this was not taken from your own childhood. You have created a gutsy, brave, and using Mama's word, "fiesty" kid. I want nothing more than to hug her, then help her punch her Daddy's lights out. I'm sure Nathan would join us. Manny |
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