Discussion of "Heart is where the Home is (2)" by LadyAdelia

Oh very nice! You really didn't have to explain the ending though. Give the reader some credit, we can figure stuff out. You should give yourself some credit too, honestly. You wrote it well enough that we could have figured it out without help:)

After rereading the story I see what you mean. I could have left off the last several sentences. Thank you for your feedback! I love your work! =)

What a KLUTZ I am sometimes...huh? Geesh, all that rambling about "something" to tell us where the baby came from..lol.
Never again will I comment on a first chapter without reading the second.
Loved it! Again, have to agree with HG; no need to explain the ending. Overall - excellent writing, great plot twist.

=) Glad you liked! Thank you for reading and for the great feedback!