The thong is hilarious!!!

Ahhh....okay. That makes sense. Thank you! Even though I do like the ghost idea better...hee..hee

Thank you! I appreciate the compliment. I loved the idea of the doors and blue is my favorite color so I had dump the math homework I was doing and get right to work. I hate math! %{ Thank you for the diversion! =)

Now I feel guilty for making such a big deal out of the house work I have to do. That said, I think I'll go do some laundry.

There has to be a glitch. I just posted 'the blue door' to the 'behind door number one' line of the contest stories and immediately it shows one vote and scores me at a 3 and I double checked to make sure that my self score of 5 took.???? Maybe a ghost is in our midst!?!?! Moohahaha!!!

I just added the blue door to "behind door number one"

I liked it very much but was confused by the position of the cow. You stated that it was in the center of a large room but then proceeded to have your character squeeze past the cow. That's an enormous cow. LOL...

that's what I thought too...who would be so nasty...if that is the case and the person doing that is reading this...stop it! =P

I would like the chance to write one more, as well. I agree that it should have advanced the plot more. I will work on that. Thank you for the good crit guys! =)

I agree with dogdiety. Loved the story! It was wonderful until the end. Then you lost me...and I was very sad...just kidding...it was kinda dissapointing, though.