LadyAdelia
Last Login: Nov. 29, 2008
43 Comments by LadyAdelia
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 1 week ago
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The thong is hilarious!!! |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Ahhh....okay. That makes sense. Thank you! Even though I do like the ghost idea better...hee..hee |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Thank you! I appreciate the compliment. I loved the idea of the doors and blue is my favorite color so I had dump the math homework I was doing and get right to work. I hate math! %{ Thank you for the diversion! =) |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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Now I feel guilty for making such a big deal out of the house work I have to do. That said, I think I'll go do some laundry. |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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There has to be a glitch. I just posted 'the blue door' to the 'behind door number one' line of the contest stories and immediately it shows one vote and scores me at a 3 and I double checked to make sure that my self score of 5 took.???? Maybe a ghost is in our midst!?!?! Moohahaha!!! |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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I just added the blue door to "behind door number one" |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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I liked it very much but was confused by the position of the cow. You stated that it was in the center of a large room but then proceeded to have your character squeeze past the cow. That's an enormous cow. LOL... |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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that's what I thought too...who would be so nasty...if that is the case and the person doing that is reading this...stop it! =P |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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I would like the chance to write one more, as well. I agree that it should have advanced the plot more. I will work on that. Thank you for the good crit guys! =) |
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LadyAdelia 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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I agree with dogdiety. Loved the story! It was wonderful until the end. Then you lost me...and I was very sad...just kidding...it was kinda dissapointing, though. |
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16 Chapters by LadyAdelia
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3.0/5.0 - published Oct 27, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Peter's weird dream
Tags: dream |
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3.8/5.0 - published Oct 24, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Oct 22, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.3/5.0 - published Oct 16, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.0/5.0 - published Oct 16, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.0/5.0 - published Oct 13, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
A fictional portrait of depression.
Tags: chains |
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3.0/5.0 - published Oct 09, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
The 18th day of my cycle...things are getting harder.
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3.6/5.0 - published Oct 09, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
A story suitable for all ages...=)
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3.0/5.0 - published Oct 08, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Help, I'm falling apart so fast!
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4.4/5.0 - published Oct 07, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
My personal war against terror
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3.8/5.0 - published Oct 06, 2008 - no comments (preview)
My monthly cycle
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3.0/5.0 - published Oct 05, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
A more heartwarming chapter than my previous chpt 2 and one that could lead into a very beautiful story.
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3.1/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
not a story
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4.1/5.0 - published Oct 02, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Oct 01, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Oct 01, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)
This story follows the happenings of a suicidal woman and her dramtic change as she stumbles upon an abandoned new born baby.
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