Discussion of "Reborn Love:Chapter1-" by Kurohiime

I am so glad I looked beyond the title. I was afraid this was just another cathartic love-found/love-lost high school memory born of teenage angst. Instead I found a gem. Your creation of imagery is first class. Your ability to describe your character and explain his motivation is fine-tuned and of a professional quality. It's not my genre, but it kept me interested and wanting to read more. Great job!