Thank you hebe6405 for the feedback. I have not been on here for a while. I will work on this and resubmit.

I was not expecting that you would explain it in the story, however just as you all have done here helps me a lot. This is different from my style of writing. I intend to read on. Thank you everyone.

I did enjoy, but I am new to reading fantasy fiction. So that is why I have lots of questions. I did read the others. Your stories are well written, I am trying to get a handle on this world of magic. I look forward to exploring more of this, so keep writing and I will keep following.

I was just starting to (seethe) about that when I sniffed...(oops, I thought the word seethe was supposed to have a space to make see the. Now reading that I don't know why I thought you meant something else.)

Could you give a bit more? The start is weak.

This has great potential.

Capitalize ‘I’ when standing a lone. University should be capitalize because it is a place. Suggestion for this sentence:
My name is Aryan Jacob , I stay in a small little town in the suburbs of Bombay, India.(make into 2 sentences)

Suggestion: My town is very simple , simple people who(suggestion: add with and drop the comma) The use of an exclamation point signifies a strong feeling. Is this the case with your usage?

Proofread to avoid punctuation, capilization, and spacing errors. It may help to read your work aloud to see if it sounds the way you intend for it to.

I like the attitude behind this. What inspired this piece? There are a few misspelled words and punctuations missing. If you do whatever you please will you really go with the wind? Sometimes that causes us to blow away from what we want.

This could use a lot of work. In the beginning you said Dave was your friend then later you say you never really liked him anyway. Proof read your work to avoid punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and sentence structure errors. Enter dialogue on different lines to show your speaker has changed. Question is Dave now a talking head?

Not able to figure out what you are trying to say. This is difficult to follow.

This is interesting that the widow slayer would honor a wish for him to go away.

A few suggestions:
Capitalize letters at the beginning of your sentences. Capitalize whenever you have 'I' standing alone. Unless the use of the lower case letters are significant.