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KatofTroy

Date Joined: March 15, 2008
Last Login: June 26, 2008

38 Comments by KatofTroy

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1 KatofTroy 9 months ago Context

Nice work.


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1 KatofTroy 9 months ago Context

This was an interesting turn of events. I like it and hope to come across some more of your work. Good job.


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2 KatofTroy 9 months ago Context

I like the sensitivity here. I could see her relief.


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1 KatofTroy 9 months, 1 week ago Context

I went back and read Fishy business and I can follow you. I am interested to see what Collin finds out at the factory.


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1 KatofTroy 9 months, 1 week ago Context

I like the story line and I can follow it. I can smell the smoke in the room and see the wrinkled old lady sizing up the young man.


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2 KatofTroy 9 months, 1 week ago Context

I have read other's points of view about this site and like others you have talked around the subject and not to anyone who can make a difference. I comment because feedback is essential to sharpening your skills. For the most part is we have to remain anonymous in order to freely express ourselves...so what. It is nice to have a place where we can let our hair down. Use what you can and ignore the trash.


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1 KatofTroy 9 months, 1 week ago Context

Okay, continue. Not sure where you are going, but I would be interested to read.


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1 KatofTroy 9 months, 1 week ago Context

What are you daydreaming about and why? What are you escaping from and desiring to get too? Please continue.


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1 KatofTroy 9 months, 1 week ago Context

I like this one. Please continue. Well written. I could see what was going on.


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1 KatofTroy 9 months, 1 week ago Context

I would have waited for the author to do the second chapter before trying this at home alone.


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5 Chapters by KatofTroy

This is different path for thought. This could happen.