Discussion of "Losing Direction ... Chapter Four" by KarishaPrescott

I enjoyed the existential contemplations mixed with cold-blooded murder. (Wow, did that sentence sound pretentious...) Anyway, great work and keep it up! I look forward to reading more by you!

To be honest, I have had the fifth chapter written for a couple days...I was waiting to see if I had a style difference that would disappoint in comparison to previous chapters. Thank you so much for your comment!

I noticed the style change and went back to the previous chapter to be sure I was still reading the same story, by the same person....lol. After that it was a great ride! I really enjoy your writing. It's quick and it's non-specific enough to allow the reader room to "write" his/her own details. You also have a great sense for things back to create greater mystery and desire to read more....wonderful!