Discussion of "Let hollow music fill you." by Joshua_Dean

Joshua_Dean;
You suffer from too much talent and make the lot of us look bad. You're quite the skilled wordsmith, keep at it, you have a gift.

I think what's really gripping here is the character you've created. he's someone everyone can identify with [lonely, aloof, online : P], but he's got enough of a raw edge to him that makes his softer side even more endearing.

also, the descriptions without actual drawn out descriptions is pretty interesting. nice use of imagery. i feel like i'm reading a spider's web-- each point connected thinly, delicately, but connected.

well done.

Very good. I picture "Angelo", the musician/addict in "The Day nothing happens...Fugue" as being similar to the main character here. But I've only written about him from his SO's point of view so I imagine him going through this when she isn't around. I'd be honored if you can figure out how to fit these characters and chapters together. Otherwise, good luck in continuing this in whatever direction your creative talent takes you!

This is a very tight well written work. I feel lost though, which could be because I'm new and unfamilar with the story.