All Comments by Joshua_Dean

Gast, I'm so glad you are staying vigil in the effort against authors deterring from what they're "suppose" to do when writing a story. It is by the unerring efforts of good men like you that further the cause to pull all stories towards the medium of what we expect them to be. Hail mediocrity and eternal repetition.
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I endorse your suicide.

ehehehe
Steve is great.

The character has been made into a historical figure who's turned fat, gay and hipster (the mac). He uses Linux. It's all there in the subtext, just look.

Fat? He lives off cigarettes alcohol and tea.

Igor Stravinsky is a composer.

When did he fall?
You have to make him fall before he gets cut!

You're crazy!
Mad!
MAD!

One helpful suggestion, in writing it's often thought best to type out numbers up to nine. I personally go up to 100, Ninety nine gets typed :P

I found like a billion comments you left to read your work so I came to read it! XD

Dragged* 'Drug' means something entirely different.

Did you read the precluding stories? :)
I left off from where the last finished.

I continued our story! I expect another daunting chapter from you soon :D

A hydra doesn't breath fire... It has poisonous breath. In face Hercules flushed out the hydra from it's lair with firelit arrows....

Thank you :)
I like the Brothers Grimm,
that really means a lot to me

Hey wow, that's really good.
You write more like me than me.

This isn't completely terrible.
Oh and 'Trees'...yeah...the uh...word '****' (I assume that's what you were referring to with "the 'f' word") is very important here. I don't think you understand the sublties of the text.

I must admit it does seem a bit empty.
But were you really masterbating while you read it Adolfius? Come back in the heat of passion and try it then give your comments; it's how erotica (I presume) is to be read.