Gast, I'm so glad you are staying vigil in the effort against authors deterring from what they're "suppose" to do when writing a story. It is by the unerring efforts of good men like you that further the cause to pull all stories towards the medium of what we expect them to be. Hail mediocrity and eternal repetition.
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I endorse your suicide.

ehehehe
Steve is great.

The character has been made into a historical figure who's turned fat, gay and hipster (the mac). He uses Linux. It's all there in the subtext, just look.

Fat? He lives off cigarettes alcohol and tea.

Igor Stravinsky is a composer.

When did he fall?
You have to make him fall before he gets cut!

You're crazy!
Mad!
MAD!

One helpful suggestion, in writing it's often thought best to type out numbers up to nine. I personally go up to 100, Ninety nine gets typed :P

I found like a billion comments you left to read your work so I came to read it! XD

Dragged* 'Drug' means something entirely different.

Did you read the precluding stories? :)
I left off from where the last finished.

I continued our story! I expect another daunting chapter from you soon :D

A hydra doesn't breath fire... It has poisonous breath. In face Hercules flushed out the hydra from it's lair with firelit arrows....