Discussion of "The Basement- 2" by Jord89

Hey guys,
Sorry about the mistakes in the first one. I wrote this story about 4 years ago and was going to use it for a certain assignment at school but then changed my mind. So it probably seems a little all over the place because it had to fit certain criteria. It had to be a romance set back in time.
I'm hoping to maybe write some more after this chapter that will clear things up a little. Please offer some advice or ideas if you have any. :-)
*Jord*

This is a good continuation of the first chapter, and far more smoother. The plot is rather transparent - but I like it. Good execution.