Hey guys,
Sorry about the mistakes in the first one. I wrote this story about 4 years ago and was going to use it for a certain assignment at school but then changed my mind. So it probably seems a little all over the place because it had to fit certain criteria. It had to be a romance set back in time.
I'm hoping to maybe write some more after this chapter that will clear things up a little. Please offer some advice or ideas if you have any. :-)
*Jord*

Exactly! And sometimes it's just great to sit down and try to think about what other people could be dealing with. We, as human beings, tend to focus too much on ourselves and don't think about how friends, family or even strangers are feeling, which is very sad but very true.

Thank you heaps. Feel free to add some ideas as to where this story could go because I'm not sure which direction I want it to take now.

Again I apologise for the no paragraphs. I don't know what happened. I typed it with paragraphs but they didn't come out when I 'published' it then.

hey thanks for that. I'm really happy to hear that someone else likes my style of writing. I added my next chapter now if you want to read it. Not sure where to go from there now though so feel free to help me out. :-)

Too depressing? Let me know what you think.

Sorry about the spacing. Don't know what happened there.
What do you think? Any advice?

What do you think guys? Worth continuing?