Discussion of "The Song Remains The Same-Chapter 1" by John_Dratos

1		honeygloom 1 year ago Reply I love this. It's hilarious! Some of the POV shifts are a little confusing, but otherwise, great job!
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1		storyman 9 months, 2 weeks ago Reply DONT CHANGE NARRATORS! But dude, really amazing!
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1		HuntsFamousWolf 9 months, 2 weeks ago Reply very very good, well written and true. many things i feel and think..
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