wsells didn't get the credit he deserves on this piece due to my half **** quick posting of the chapter we completed. He posted other "One Liners" chapters as well, but unfortunately I didn't see his additions before I progressed with the chapter. My apologies wsells, it was fun writing back and forth we should do it again sometime, I will be starting quite a few more stories this way I like where it took the starting chapter. Everyone make these one liners your own and we can build great stories to come, Thanx JohnB.

I did add you in the intro but I can't figure out why the intro never shows up I was thinking about reposting the story with the ref. at the end of each line. I am sorry it didn't give credit where it was due the first time.

I like where you took the first sentence, I kept the vibe going hopefully people will follow suit or maybe you can keep it coming.

I think you were adding on to the "One Liners", but you started a new story instead of adding on to "One Liners II" you don't have to change but it would keep it in order for searching purposes.
Thanx JohnB