Discussion of "Jinxedit's Take on 'The Element of Love'" by Jinxedit

Fantastic idea and excellent penmanship! You did a fabulous job of mashing a rather broad paragraph...;o).

I really liked your imaginative characters and the way they interacted in a traditional love story. Too bad, though, that you ended it...;o(.
That first date...maybe with a bully showing up and Steven saving the day...would have made for a great next chapter mash!

Aaah! Now I regret ending it. It is fiction, though, so anything can happen.

I like that idea. I'd love to see you mash it if you're up for it.

Congrats Jinxedit. A feature story and it is very feature story worthy. I love the imaginative characters and interplay. Well done.

Thank you!! I know they're picked by formula but I'm still giddy like a schoolgirl. =D

LMAO