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Discussion of "The Betrayal" by Jia


2 bloocat 9 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

That was awesome!!! i cant wait for the next chapter.i am new here and just wanted to read stories here!! and i must say i really like the story! when are you publishing the next chapter?


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2 ino 9 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

lovely! cant wait for the next one!


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1 Jia 9 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

HI! thanku! this was my very first story on story mash! Thanks alot! i really appreciate it! and to be honest this story is based upon reality!


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1 SilenceiztheonlyWord 9 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

wow really? thats cool! :D now i wanna read it more!


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1 SilenceiztheonlyWord 9 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

wow i was actually thinking that would solve everything! if the baby was born male and female! this is really good, i was so worried that she'd have a girl and they'd like try to kill her or something. phew... glad its both. i was all "if the baby was a boy and a girl then no one would complain!"
good story so far. hope u continue it!


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1 Jia 9 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Thanks Alot guys! I am posting the second half in while.I hope you guys enjoy the second one too.Its' a little emotional though! :)


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