Discussion of "The Field is Unkind" by JaidenRivera

yayyy im the first to comment :)

love it !! u shud write more.. !

amazinggg !!

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thanksssss how do i make money though?!?!?!? waaaaaaaaaaa

hahaha i have nooo cluee !!!

i just rated ur story btw :)

mwahhh

wow curry
this is gooooood, like really good.
keep it up:D
hrm i wonder how much ur gonna make?:p

I like your story. I don't get how you are suppose to make money without tons of views.

I thought this was a beautiful piece of writing, just steadily leading to nowhere in particular, but at the same time it keeps you drawn to this little guy.
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The money front; obviously you make money by having more people see your page. The way to do this is to either write comments on other people's pages, so they'll look at you, and hopefully your work. Or, if you write more chapters, you have a higher chance of people seeing one of your pages, and likely that if they like what they see they'll read more of your stuff. And of course, if the writing is good people will be more likely to read it.
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Hope that helps.