Discussion of "A Glimpse of Hell" by JadeRose
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writerwannabe 9 months, 3 weeks ago
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Good follow-up. I only wish it had been a little longer, but you left it hanging perfectly for a mash. I gave you a 4. |
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JadeRose 9 months, 3 weeks ago
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I have a bit more in mind for a part 2, thank you for the vote and the comment! |
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ShadowMan 9 months, 2 weeks ago
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Very good mash! I like the tension build up at the end. |
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JadeRose 9 months, 2 weeks ago
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Thank you! They will return is the reason I joined Storymash in the first place it was very very good! |
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HuntsFamousWolf 9 months, 2 weeks ago
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hell is a real as created in the mind,bravo,alpha |
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