LMAO! This has got to be the cutest thing I've read in a long time! I can't wait to see what if anything you can come up with next to top it!!!

I really enjoyed this story especially since I work at the VA and my dad is a vet. Plus I've been at those bus stops late at night and the vibe is much creepier than the one you gave. I think you did a great job!

Talk about some pretty random and somewhat strange and intriguing thought process nash.

This is an awesome story! I love all the descriptions of the people, and yes you should be really, really proud of yourself! Outstandingly well done!

This is a great piece! Not to correct you WB, but Persephone ate 6 pomegranite seeds so she stays with Hades 6 months out of the year. One month for every seed. The 6 months is supposed to mark the time of winter because it's when Demeter mourns for her daughter. When she returns to her then it's time for spring.

very interesting, can't wait to see what happens next!

LMAO... just don't cheat on your girl and you'll be all right.

Thanks very much guys I really appreciate it and I'm glad that you liked it!

I like where this is going! Really great start!

aww come on wwb, tell us the truth. You really are Willie! LOL I liked the story though, really cool. Seven Spanish Angels was always my fave.