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Discussion of "College Vampire" by Jackoalltrades


1 honeygloom 6 years, 6 months ago Reply

Interesting take on an old story and I like the character so far:)


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1 theblackhand 6 years, 6 months ago Reply

Good writing, you seemed rush though. Slow down, take a breather, and get more detailed as you write. You drew me in with the story and title, just get more detailed and graphic if you continue the story......


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1 Jackoalltrades 6 years, 6 months ago Reply

I wasn't planning to, leaving it out there for someone else to take a crack at it, but now I feel challenged to develop it a bit.


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