Discussion of "Teleported" by Jackoalltrades

WOW! Spectacular story, Jacko!

Loved how you turned what appeared to be a regular mugging into a sci-fi thriller!

Excellent wordsmithing and phrasing, totally believable dialogue and a really great premise; to say nothing of the cliff hanger ending.

Certainly among the top 10 or so I've read here...;o).

You could always mash it ;) I'd be honored.

Also, the cliff hanger ending was meant to be mashed.

So read the danged mash, already! LOL.

Well WWB, I didn't think it was one of my best works, but I did very much enjoy writing it. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

LOL...ain't that the way it goes? What I thought was the best I'd ever written, wasn't seen that way by the folks here...and, of course, vice versa has also happened...;o)

I haven't mashed anything for a long, long time; maybe, this will be it. I'll give it another read and see if anything pops into my head...;o)

Okay, I think I've got a string on a mash...couple of days..;o)

Really liked this one! Am glad it was the featured chapter today as I might have missed it! Looking forward to your mash writerwannabe. Feel like there are lots of possibilities to explore!
I think I would have prefered it if your supernatural-mugger didn't have a gun though, but maybe that's just because I'm British...

We could learn a lot from the Brits on gun control!! ;o)

Wow. I keep thinking you main character isn't in the same century he left. Time Transported would make escape and survival a whole different experence direction. Maybe towards the end of a full story we would find him even glad that the mugger sent him to this future world. Could be fun to create a whole book on this first chapter.

This was a great story!

Wow this is a great story. It reminds me of that movie jumper. Good job!

"It was an amazing feeling tainted only by the vise grip on his forearm." Favorite line! Wonderful story, with genius writting! Full of twists and turns and just...WOW.

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Nice story Jack! I love a good sci-fi thriller!