Discussion of "The Trader Chronicle, 4" by Jackoalltrades
dogdeity11 6 years ago
Jackoalltrades – Since Hosus is my favorite character so far I was delighted you dedicated a chapter to her story! I enjoyed learning more about her personal life. I was wondering how Bertran and Nar would be involved as they are from the same village. Maybe they are the trackers Lian is inviting to stay with her for protection? Guess I’ll find out wont I.
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Jackoalltrades 6 years ago
After rereading it, I did use "had" way too many times. Thanks for the input Dog.
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