Jackoalltrades
Last Login: Sept. 12, 2008
106 Comments by Jackoalltrades
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Jackoalltrades 3 months, 4 weeks ago
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Well I can honestly say that I can't wait for my chapter. This is gonna be great! With great luck, no one will make it too serious in the meanwhile, because this has such fantastic comic potential. Well done! |
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Jackoalltrades 3 months, 4 weeks ago
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That's the way to do it. |
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Jackoalltrades 3 months, 4 weeks ago
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Actually giving life to the Fairy bones. I like it. Was personally staying away from that particular plot possibility to try something new, but yours worked it, short and sweet. |
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Jackoalltrades 3 months, 4 weeks ago
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Hmmm no contestants eh? I guess that would make me a shoo-in? Gimme a day or two to get all the background info and another day or so to formulate my mash, and I'll try and make it worthy. Have patience, there are still some of us willing to challenge the leaderboard. |
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Jackoalltrades 4 months ago
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Blackhand, only have 1 correction and someone already pointed it out. "Irregardless" isn't a word. But other than that, your piece creeped me out to the extreme. Excellently written, and you're right about the MHP. You have to know sane and insane, and mister, you write insane well enough indeed. |
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Jackoalltrades 4 months ago
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Never tried comedy before. Could be interesting. Put me down for a spot Honeygloom, if there are spots left to be had. |
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Jackoalltrades 4 months ago
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An interesting little piece. I felt the setting left a little to be desired. The character's on the sand, but the rocky sand of a lake beach or the soft sun-warmed sand of the ocean? Of course, it could just be that the character was too drunk to pay close enough attention. Not your best piece, but certainly an interesting beginning. |
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Jackoalltrades 4 months ago
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Greetings All, I'm Jackoalltrades, though I prefer Jack with my friends here on SM. Quicker to write. Anyway, I'm a college student in North Carolina (though I'm a New Jersey transplant) who generally has a lot of time on his hands, and then loses all that time, so I get streaks on SM where I tear it up and then disappear for a month or two. Writing is my first love, and though I tend to focus on fantasy storylines, I've been known to switch it up and mash various other genres of plotlines. I've been writing since about the age of 5, and I remember getting odd looks from my 8th grade english teacher about a creative short story about skeletons attacking me while playing Age of Empires. That was a fun one to create. I'm a prodigious reader of fantasy and SciFi, though I began with the Hardy Boys and Tom Clancy and Jack Higgins. I always enjoy choosing random stories to glance through, and it has generally proven an effective method to find the diamonds in the rough..Aladdin reference anyone? I'm also a gigantic movie buff, which means I have a tendency to pick through character builds and plotlines from all the movies and books I immerse myself in. I look forward to spending another streak on SM for a while, and I can't wait to get cracking on a few more chapters of my Trader Chronicles. Excellent series, I recommend to all ;) Remember, your imagination is your soul. So don't be boring. Jack |
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Jackoalltrades 5 months, 2 weeks ago
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This was very amusing. I enjoyed it greatly. I liked the play style it was written in, and the story was interesting, to say the least. Why rob Tom Brady, besides the fact that he's absurdly well off? Your characters were superb, and their interaction was colorful and playful and just a lot of fun to read. |
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Jackoalltrades 5 months, 2 weeks ago
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An interesting collection of thoughts...knowing human nature we will most likely be the conquerors, or at least the attempted conquerors. |
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27 Chapters by Jackoalltrades
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3.6/5.0 - published Sep 12, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
A short poetic piece inspired by a night sky with rippled clouds.
Tags: poetry |
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3.7/5.0 - published Sep 10, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 21, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
This is a connector piece, a way to end this part of the story and maybe touch upon the bad guy...as all good fantasy novels do. If you read this, I'm not publishing yet. Tell me if it's up to par.
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3.0/5.0 - published Jul 07, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
Is this mysterious girl here to rescue Matt from his dull and dreary life? Or is she there with a more malicious purpose?
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4.4/5.0 - published Jul 05, 2008 - 6 comments (preview)
Something to think about.
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3.5/5.0 - published Jul 03, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story (preview)
He figures out the vampire's weakness: Onions.
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3.1/5.0 - published Jun 25, 2008 - 4 comments (preview)
A poet loses his love and dire inspiration compels his hand.
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3.3/5.0 - published Apr 24, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Donald discovers that nothing is as it seems with his discovery of the country of Luxembourg.
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4.0/5.0 - published Apr 23, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
Donald discovers a new side of himself.
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3.5/5.0 - published Apr 23, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story (preview)
Life goes on. But what is life with(out) a vampire?
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3.8/5.0 - published Apr 22, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
Thought I'd change it up a bit. Spin the telling ever so slightly.
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3.4/5.0 - published Apr 22, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Apr 21, 2008 - 3 comments (preview)
This was an idea that came to me on a plane flight. Felt like fun so let's see how you like it.
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4.3/5.0 - published Apr 18, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Apr 17, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 17, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 16, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 15, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 14, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 13, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Apr 17, 2008 - no comments - start of story (preview)
Trawdley's voice, while experimenting with different speech patterns, was even creeping ME out. Imagine a whispering Igor with a lisp who a heavy German accent. Also, Sley is pronounced like "sleigh".
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 11, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Apr 11, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Apr 10, 2008 - 5 comments
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3.2/5.0 - published Apr 10, 2008 - no comments (preview)
This is something I started a long time ago. The writing is a little juvenile, the little that I've published, but it could be a good start to something.
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3.8/5.0 - published Apr 10, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.2/5.0 - published Apr 10, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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