Right. Well, stack it up against all the other apologies I've made on here. Here's yours: I'm sorry.

To all who visit this chapter, please, no more comments. Let's all move on. No more drama. :)

And I'm not being rude any further, so please don't suggest that I am.. I'm not directing this to you, Conception. Just to anyone else visiting this chapter, lol.

Chapter Closed-

I think perhaps you missed the whole 'thanks' and the '..appreciated just the same'.

I'm glad you agree with him. This was to be a positive close on this situation.

Nothing further~

I think it's amusing that no-one has written another chapter to this since the fiasco started, lol.

All this yammering and no output. Tsk, tsk, Swift. :)

In any event, I'm moving on to other projects. However,I would like to see the development that you and the rest create after this.

As it happens,I've been voted off Lucifer Island. :)

All the best to you, Clone, and the rest.

J/F

Okay. Retract the aforementioned "oprah winfrey special" comment, because that's what this is on its way to becoming. It doesn't need to be this big, or have any more people jumping on the debate wagon. You haven't offended me, and I apologize if I came off as harsh. Not my intention, but as you can plainly see, things are never their true proportions on the internet.

In any event, please continue with your story, and best of luck with it.

Conception- Thanks for stepping in, but there won't be any further need for a mediator. It's appreciated just the same.

J/F

Oh, by the way, I'm sorry. Your name probably isn't Talia. Guess I was wrapped up in your narrative and called you by the character. Apologies again.

I'm mad about this one, Talia. It's got that real gritty feeling of the big city.. and it feels like you've captured her independent spirit while describing this savage creature.

I'd love to see where this leads...was going to add to it, but I've got nothing now. :)

Before you decide to critique, it would be in your best interest to use proper punctuation and/or correct spelling usage. Secondly, I see no condescending points in my story. The only thing that would make you have anything to say is my comment about your story clashing with the original, ergo, making it seem to me to be a direct clone and ripoff of said story. Mine was taking it in a new direction, which is the point of StoryMash-- taking an author's work and making it your own.

So, in summation, my comments were not a gibe at your writing style, just an personal opinion. Don't take it to heart. If you have any sincere comments about my writing, I welcome them. Otherwise, let's leave the pettiness at the door and get on with the writing.

Thanks~

It's probably because I'm using Firefox..These silly tags don't show up...I'll definitely try to pay attention to that next time. Thanks again.

This doesn't show up on my computer, but thank you.

So, I like where you are with this.. It's a humanizing Satan type thing..so in my chapter I took your direction and gave it a turn...hope it's closer to your original groundwork than turning it into the opposing sides oprah winfrey special that the others went with(Not knocking that of course, it's an interesting angle, just not mine.)

Thanks~