All Comments by JEWELZ

Thank You Everyone for the constructive criticism.It makes me want to push myself to do better Thanks very much!

I just wanted to say Thank You for starting this story, I love it! Its so adorable! it would make a great Children's book! I have enjoyed collaborating with you on it very much! I'm curious to see how long we can keep it going.This is my first collaborative story too.I'm looking forward to your next entry.

Thanks for the comments and criticism,its all helpful to me but to the last comment that was made, I have to say there are only so many words out there to describe sexual experiences without sounding just plain stupid,writing these types of stories is not as easy as you might think.Most women writers who write porn their stories are categorized as soft I wanted to make the statement that women can write the hard stuff too. I do apologize if I have offended anyone here that was not my intention, I just found this place while in the process of getting my writing career off the ground and thought maybe it could help.