Discussion of "Renaissance: Treading – Day 329, Dinnertime" by JD_Renaissance

And the anticipated trouble with the newbies begins! Well played, JD. Just the right amount of tension in a believable first confrontation. Dialogue was superb, the inserts about Renni's gauntlets - perfectly timed. Next...;o)

Thanks, Wwb. This was one of my favorite chapters to write thus far. I'm so glad it came off so well.

Great show down of forces JD! Well played. I loved the fact that Marshall was standing at the enterence the whole time and never spoke up, letting Renni handle it.

Teehee... thanks. Glad you liked it.

Now THIS is a side of Renni we haven't seen before - and I LIKE it. Go girl, go!