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Discussion of "Fur-Babies (1)" by JD_Renaissance


1 dogdeity11 2 years, 7 months ago Reply

'They’re a dog and a half long and half a dog short.'
that cracked me up.
Dachshunds are awesome. Nice paragraph.


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1 Alkamyst 2 years, 7 months ago Reply

Well done. ;-)


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1 Aggeloi 2 years, 7 months ago Reply

I agree with dogdeity (I suppose he'd be an expert on the topic?) - the opening line was FABULOUS. Well done!


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1 honeygloom 2 years, 7 months ago Reply

My old neighbors had dachshunds, they are such characters. I love that you chose them:) And the opening line is perfect!


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1 Cornelius 2 years, 7 months ago Reply

Absolutely beautiful. The first line is a grabber and your flawless prose is charming and touching. Have you read "The Daisy Sutra"? All dog-lovers should read it.


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1 MiddleBlocker 1 year, 7 months ago Reply

Haha. I agree, the first line was the best.


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