Discussion of "Fur-Babies (1)" by JD_Renaissance
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dogdeity11 2 years, 7 months ago
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'They’re a dog and a half long and half a dog short.' |
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Alkamyst 2 years, 7 months ago
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Well done. ;-) |
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Aggeloi 2 years, 7 months ago
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I agree with dogdeity (I suppose he'd be an expert on the topic?) - the opening line was FABULOUS. Well done! |
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honeygloom 2 years, 7 months ago
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My old neighbors had dachshunds, they are such characters. I love that you chose them:) And the opening line is perfect! |
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Cornelius 2 years, 7 months ago
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Absolutely beautiful. The first line is a grabber and your flawless prose is charming and touching. Have you read "The Daisy Sutra"? All dog-lovers should read it. |
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MiddleBlocker 1 year, 7 months ago
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Haha. I agree, the first line was the best. |
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