Discussion of "Renaissance: Flood – Day 362, 9:45am" by JD_Renaissance

OK..It's OFFICIAL. I'm a klutz! Please forget what I said about the previous chapter. This one explained Renni's actions and I was way off base.

Well done, here, JD and the news of the Harbinger's returning was paced and placed expertly...;o)

No worries, Wwb. You did have some points in your earlier comment. I was worried that this chapter would slow things down with explanations, but am glad I put it in after all.

Btw - Thank you soooo much for all your comments and support. It means so much to me that you have followed this story from the beginning. Again, Thank You!

This one was slow for me. I don't think the reason was the explanations, but rather the scene in itself or the pacing. I'm not sure. Other than that, it was great. The ending was unexpected. Good job JD.

Thanks, Dkk. I think if I rewrite the previous chapter well enough, then I can in turn make this one a bit faster paced. Not sure.